thanx for the wonderful and very correct input, but i believe it should read, "our young 'men and women' are pawns in a game as old as time." i'm not trying to be smart here but the women definitely deserve their due...again thank you for your wonderful comment. God bless you. bob
Date: 17 July 2014
From: Just L
Ria, about For Just L:
Date: 20 July 2014
I am a woman who writes for a living
So my poetry comes in spurts, when I am distracted from meeting a deadline, during times of heart break, and when I am giddy with new romance, and once in a blue moon all of these events collide. And, not all of it, all the time, makes it to these pages, but I am a pretty open book.
Keep pouring your heart out!
Farah, about Time to let go: Short and to the point, it's also how I'm feeling recently. Good stuff.
Just L, about A Waxing Crescent Kiss: I don't know why, but the first line of this struck we with fierceness. I truly love it and empathize with the sentiment. I really liked the originality of the form and style of the entire poem too. It's innovative in certain ways that I find appealing. Your writing has changed and matured over the time I've been reading it. I really enjoyed this one especially.
Farah, about Cycle :Wow. I think you've just about summed up my life in this one...nice piece.